pure nature
Can anyone explain the following phenomenon?
Almost every story be it fanfiction or original, begins with descriptions of nature.
I hate descriptions of nature. Maybe it is me why, but oh well ...
Was there not some man who once said that the first sentence of a story a compelling must be, otherwise the story is difficult to ride and the reader gets bored quickly?
And it is not really better to just be the nature be nature? If interested, what color the leaf, which trickled down from a cherry tree as a character X Y is a character slammed that he flew the back teeth from the mouth ...?
What is more interesting? A dead leaf or the reason for this heavy blow? Probably the latter, I guess. Besides the paper still has "tell Mary and the children that I love her" breathy, before it came up with a cry of agony on the floor. Then, admittedly, the paper interesting.
But honestly Why Nature? The fact that the poor can be in Charas Nothing is clear to me but every blade of grass is described by a skewed to detail that would have shocked even Fontane, can not be, right? I read a story because the plot and the charas and not because the author describes as beautiful buttercups. _-_ Meeeh ...
But as I said: I hate descriptions. My brain switched off after three Sets, which describe only once to draft and adjusts again when the eyes meet with quotation marks.
Say: The dialogue.
I can not even describe. Recently had one of my beta readers, and I have a real fight with a tent description. The problem was that I was not just a fantasy story, "It looked like a Roman tent" could not write. (Okay, I can at an original that plays in today's time-not, but let us set aside the time ...) For my failure out, I then created my own version U_U
tent in the things I do not want to live . XD
But the worst are people. No! The worst are (drum roll) face! > __ \u0026lt;I hate them and I can not! But oh well, they hold must be> - \u0026lt;do not mean to not want the ozenblauen eyes, sensual lips and thin, arched eyebrows just above the shoulders of a person standing in the nowhere, framed by long black hair .. . but damn!
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