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pure nature

Can anyone explain the following phenomenon?
Almost every story be it fanfiction or original, begins with descriptions of nature.
I hate descriptions of nature. Maybe it is me why, but oh well ...
Was there not some man who once said that the first sentence of a story a compelling must be, otherwise the story is difficult to ride and the reader gets bored quickly?



And it is not really better to just be the nature be nature? If interested, what color the leaf, which trickled down from a cherry tree as a character X Y is a character slammed that he flew the back teeth from the mouth ...?
What is more interesting? A dead leaf or the reason for this heavy blow? Probably the latter, I guess. Besides the paper still has "tell Mary and the children that I love her" breathy, before it came up with a cry of agony on the floor. Then, admittedly, the paper interesting.
But honestly Why Nature? The fact that the poor can be in Charas Nothing is clear to me but every blade of grass is described by a skewed to detail that would have shocked even Fontane, can not be, right? I read a story because the plot and the charas and not because the author describes as beautiful buttercups. _-_ Meeeh ...

But as I said: I hate descriptions. My brain switched off after three Sets, which describe only once to draft and adjusts again when the eyes meet with quotation marks.
Say: The dialogue.
I can not even describe. Recently had one of my beta readers, and I have a real fight with a tent description. The problem was that I was not just a fantasy story, "It looked like a Roman tent" could not write. (Okay, I can at an original that plays in today's time-not, but let us set aside the time ...) For my failure out, I then created my own version U_U

tent in the things I do not want to live . XD

But the worst are people. No! The worst are (drum roll) face! > __ \u0026lt;I hate them and I can not! But oh well, they hold must be> - \u0026lt;do not mean to not want the ozenblauen eyes, sensual lips and thin, arched eyebrows just above the shoulders of a person standing in the nowhere, framed by long black hair .. . but damn!

What Is An Impending Pregnancy

Ouch> -

This is now the third attempt to write a new entry XD Habs have never made it to the end, but whatever. > _ \u0026lt;

My head roars as anything and the weather is simply crappy, but hey: I just got my last exam written O_o English. About Malinche and Vineta históricas. Well, the text was then that we have not yet vh .. I habs won just once wrote. > __ \u0026lt;
I published yesterday in a fit of madness and on the advice of a friend a FF. O_o rarely what I write because I Charas strange to me not so good come clear. However, there are always some series / games, etc. that take me so that I do what needs to write.
Not good ...

Constructive criticism of course desirable. You can find the piece of work is on to this site:
http://www.fanfiktion.de/s/447363df00001bfc06a00fa0


creating the next time I hope a more interesting record. _-_-Rezha

Knee Pain Cycling Accident

prescribe disgusting on my part> _>

Klein writes short prose:
"rawen could feel how his blood from the face shot." Yuck! The XD makes everything so dirty! X_X
was the alternative:

"feel rawen could, as his blood to his heart like it did, and shot him in the pants."
Hm .. the nicest interpretation of this sentence, the presumption would allow rawen has his days. O_o Oh God!

Just as well, "It sounded threatening in his eyes." Hmh, I've also always with eyes U_U The Chara's just something special ...°_°

I think I should write no more today ... XD