prescribe disgusting on my part> _>
Klein writes short prose:
"rawen could feel how his blood from the face shot." Yuck! The XD makes everything so dirty! X_X
was the alternative:
"feel rawen could, as his blood to his heart like it did, and shot him in the pants."
Hm .. the nicest interpretation of this sentence, the presumption would allow rawen has his days. O_o Oh God!
Just as well, "It sounded threatening in his eyes." Hmh, I've also always with eyes U_U The Chara's just something special ...°_°
I think I should write no more today ... XD
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