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Sun I Have recently so excited about ne story that I have myself tried a similar situation for a story.





Well, it's Slash and I do not usually write for Slash, but oh well. > _>
was the time worth it to me now ... I hope it is not so illogical and stereotyped as his "Vorursacher. I will not say which story has me so excited, nor the name of the author (obviously). Ironically, Madame already got to be related to one of her stories on the palm.
Why she did not write?
She has, first, a large fan base (I hate flame wars> - \u0026lt;), and secondly, would bring nothing anyway.

which is sad because she really has a beautiful, sleek style. Meaning, it reads pretty darn good. And what about the plot?
Um, yes. We do not talk about it ... > _ \u0026lt;But cliches and stereotypes also are soooo nice MUST be written just ran it. ARGH! ~ _ ~ Arms Story ...

Well. Back to my story.
Prolog + two chapters are now online, I type the third straight. I hope I get the story finished. Have you ever tried a new system to plan and plot NEN down. Let's see if it'll work. *-* If so, jumping for joy in the triangle! XD

I now have the story published in fanfiktion.de, fictionpress.com, and originalbishounen.de Eh ... in a smaller, lesser-known board. There Were None to comments so far (which I expected, but hey, it comes to the attempt to XD) with the exception of fanfiktion.de

I'm happy! XD Five Comments so far. I think that is a very good cut, considering that I have no solid readership. OO Or? O_o AAAH!

Have I really given effort, a fairly original and above all logical (!) Building plot. The part not so easy. O_o I'm quite happy with it.

It serves me as a writing exercise for me to 'warm' stay in the letter and not get rusty, rel. fall back. I call it secretly loving 'Gammel Story'. XD Even if the effort that I make myself (ref. which I must make) no longer a part of my herumgegammel longer possible _-_-well, yes I know that something is. * Grumble *

worried I merely a Chara, because it has really good 'Tucktuck' qualities. What is a
Tucktuck?

Tucktuck's the kind of Chara, the all abkriegt, but not so whiny, as the normal petrol-Uke. They are ... hm ... like Weiss Kreuz Charas. O_o So, as I have met her: looking with a dark past, incredibly handsome, with a suffering look through the world, whine when no one will notice except the reader
etc. So you have actually also really good Semequalitäten.

Well, definitely threatens the Chara exhibit this error. 've Thought about it more economical Please be careful in history. His major appearance Tucktuck anyway until the end. And then he is no longer guaranteed Tucktuck XD At least not for long ... = _ = MWAHAHAHA!

Well, if it goes according to plan. can> _> Until then, it happens very well be that the Charas again umschmeißen the whole plot. > _ \u0026lt;They have done often enough ...

Hm I hope I'll manage with the slash. My biggest fear is real is that I make out of them women. O_o I have too many examples deterrent read, the story should not end simply. But there already plugged in there too much trouble.

would be a further panic to incorporate too much slash. In the sense that too many gay charas. = _ = Happen quickly. Well, the focus is fortunately not so much on the romance between the two charas. That is, actually ... it! O__o Well yes, but it has a story (I hope heavy), so that they do not necessarily always sit together.

well even more from the ground, as they would otherwise jump at each other's throats. They may not particularly ... U_U Well, under the circumstances, that's quite understandable.






Sun, has been here to see the whole thing and read. If the day funzt> _ \u0026lt;
Your comments etc. I am looking forward as always, there is no soalnge Flame. Ne writing exercise yes it is always there to learn new things O_o So bring it on. Even if criticism is not beautiful. > - \u0026lt;
But please factual. TT